Peer comments 3 annotation

Peer comments

Jessica Villasenor

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Comment Catherine
I think you provide us very clear and social background  to explain why the women in Egypt use veil. It is quite good.
Response 
Thank you.

Comment Vivian
I also think that your presentation is very well organized.
Response 
Thank you. I really thought many times before writing.  In previous annotations, during peer comments, everybody was asking me "what does this mean?", etc. Thus, I tried to make it simpler and easier and not to include many technical words, that is why I didn't put any concept or definition in this annotation

Question Tim
Does a veil really keep women off harassment?
Response
I'm going to talk about that in my next annotation. I have some statistics that shows that he veil is not helpful.