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 Jesica Villasenor

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April

 I like the title. I think “veil against harassment” is only an excuse for the religious people to wear the veil. I remember you wrote about crisis of identity, I don’t understand. You can check the spelling again.

Response

Thank you. I dint write about it, I just cited that some religions may think that it can help women to be safer but the point is that is not an effective measure. I will revise the whole spelling.

Ariel

" but it only confirms that the problems is deeper that what we think and the solution for this crisis of identity can only be reached through long terms restructuring society programs. "
Powerful.

Response
Thank you.

Evelyn

What is the crisis of identity? What do you mean? What kind of crisis? I’m more confused now.

Response

I wrote about it in previous annotations. I mentioned that Egyptian people emigrated to other countries, and also that the TV and other western values have changed the Egyptian identity that is why now they are in a crisis of identity

Sharon

I think if you can explain better of how the pictures and connections of harassment.

Response

I will. Thank you.